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Superhero:Part One

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    Up there in the sky a figure appears. Could this...possibly be the shining hope this city desperately needs? Unfortunately the town will come to encounter a very shocking discovery.
    The city of Blue Ruin was a pitiful place to live in not only because the city has the highest crime rate in the universe, but also because no one can leave once they enter. Why, you ask, can they not leave? The reason being their crime rate has reached the point that the world no longer acknowledges the city and treats it and the people there as nothing. It also doesn't help that they basically were relocated to a remote island so that it was easier to ignore them. That is also probably why no one has ever heard of Blue Ruin.
    But that will soon change thanks to a savior that will decrease the crime rate by twelve percent, which for that city is a lot. Who is this savior? No one knows. All that the townspeople know is that they came out of nowhere almost like a miracle. This story is about said hero now let this journey begin!
    It all began one bright and sunny morning, when a girl was laying out in the fields without a care in the world. While she was laying in the fields the store she was supposed to keep an eye on got raided. This was a typical day in this town. The girl, Rain Toft, was a lazy, unreliable person. The only reason she keeps getting hired is because everyone knows she is too lazy to even commit any kind of crime, therefore being the only trustworthy person. As Rain laid there sleeping a mysterious bolt of lightning hit her, but being Rain she ignored it.
    "Rain! You lazy bum! Where are ya?!" a booming voice yelled.
    "Oh, crap" Rain thought as she opened her eyes, "the store owner sounds really mad this time. I better hit the road before she finds me. Who knows what she'll do to me."
    As soon as Rain got up she zoomed into the air. This gave Rain butterflies in her stomach which made her laugh, that is until she looked down and saw that she was twenty-two feet off the ground. She started to freak out, causing her to plummet towards the earth.
This will be, what I hope a gag story=P (Razz) . Right now this is all I have thought upNo, I disagree!  so it will be continued another day. Enjoy.:D (Big Grin) 

It was continued, if interested click here: rawr1909.deviantart.com/art/Su…
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